domingo, 1 de septiembre de 2013

Section 2, Task 2

The new leisure centre that you opened last week isn't accepted here in the area. Everyone thought that this could be a great idea but now everyone hates it.
The first problem of it, is that it's appearance is boring. The main thing that can make people to go to that leisure centre is the appearance. If you see this leisure centre from the outside your will know that it will be boring. Another thing is that when you enter, there is nothing to do! There's only 1 ride that is aceptable, Because the others are for 5 year-old kids. I think that the reason why this is boring is because it has only three rides! There is a solution, make new rides with a good design. If you make these new things people will be attracted and all of them will go.
 
Sincerely,
Juan C. Manriquez

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